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Literature
Your existence
I wanna feel the tension of your existence
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Literature
None is you
I think you
And look for you
In new places
In unfamiliar faces
But you are not there
Of course...
You are never there
None is you
None is like me.
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Literature
Light in a rainy day
I have a handful of yellow flowers
The air is wet
The music louder
I breathe in the rain
And feel the light of a cloudy day.
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Literature
I am mine
So i lay down
on my bed
made of sand
made of air.
I stare out
to the line
ripping this place
from affar.
And i wonder
where you are
if you're happy
if you're sad.
Do you think me
do you mind
if i'm happy
if i'm sad.
I am here
I am fine
I am better
I am mine.
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Literature
Do i hold the key?
Where am i?
I'm dry form losing myself
Overloaded and dry.
Empty
Heavy emptiness.
No cure but time, i think, i guess
I'm all ravelled up and blind now
Too much information and too much space
Not enough bridges.
Do i hold the key really?
Would it be ok if i don't?
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Literature
What it means
What do you know?
What do you care about?
I return here everytime
I like thinking of you
It gives you life
Cause you're so silent
And away
Is it me, to you, you think?
Do you think
About that
About me?
Do you have a certain knowledge about it at least?
I wish i could tell you everything
Like what happened
And what it is
(what it meant to me)
I wish you could tell me something
Of what happened and what it is
(of what it meant to me)
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Literature
Live as if you only had to be
Feel it beating, under your feet
Breathe yourself out, and become a tree
Live as if you only had to be.
Dare to stand up, and look from within
Let the sunlight traspass your skin
Live as if you only had to be
Burn your world down, let it disappear
Then form dead ground, rebuild everything
Live as if you only had to be.
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Literature
You will miss her
Rain
Music from a piano
Light cold
Stillness
Nobody whispers.
A flower
A ghost
The ticking of a clock.
She will be gone
(And you'll miss her).
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Literature
The hidden
Sometimes i see me not
I think there are things,
aspects,
I hide
involuntarily.
And things i hide,
I carry,
in a montruos way,
upon me,
evidently,
harmfully.
While i speak of sun and fairies,
the unsaid,
the unseen,
still now,
unacknowledged,
rapes me.
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Literature
Psychedelic III
You forget
You are and you are not
The flowers? The foam?
Who are we not?
Where have they gone?
Where are we all?
A tree you see, and hold to it
Waving legs, persisting heart
Fresh the wind
That from the leaves
A message green
It gives to thee
You float again
on candy tasting waves
Your line of thought
Long since lost away
Abandoned
You float
Nothing and all
You go, you go.
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Literature
Psychedelic II
Travelling foam will take you far
Knows not of direction, space or time.
Dream of never ending music
The high, the lows.
Losing parts along the way
They fall, they fall.
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Literature
Psychedelic I
Rainbow road i see you
Floating i approach
Chiming bells on the back i hear
It's the magic, the music, the wings i'm feeling.
Where do you take me?
Where do you lead to?
I smell the flowers,
They speak
-trust us, you fairy,
let us lead-.
Reduced to foam
I go, i go.
And the twinkling stars get to me
Confusing my eyes,
my voice
i lose.
Freed am i from all intention
Nothing i am
I float, i go.
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Literature
Alone
They are tears of rendition
Of heart-felt, quiet acceptance
Sorrow
For what will not be
For what it is not.
Hollow infinit space
Hard and cold currents of air
The violent, hurting sound of its race against nothing.
Conquered darkness
Comfortable home
No vase remains unemptied
I am back to being alone.
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Power of the City :icondarkdex52:darkdex52 1,108 106
Literature
BIPOLAR LOVER
A mind bent on love
Broken
A heart that has no soul
To far Gone
Written in blood, I loved you  
The distance
A message unread
Suicide
I never said goodbye
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Literature
SIDE EFFECTS
Life and death
Do I exist
Or did I forget to begin
A means to an end
To live again
Out side myself
Some where in between
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Literature
Limitless
As sick and masochistic as it is,
there is a rush in pushing your body to the limits.
There is a high in knowing
that you are defying nature
to live on this much,
to live on this little,
to be shrinking, disappearing
and to survive it.
I wanted to see how long I could go,
running on fumes.
I wanted to find the bare minimum required to subsist.
Food was a possible miscalculation of calories,
a loss of certainty about your control over chaos,
your control over yourself.
The horrible possibility that you are taking
more than you deserve.
That's where I felt in control,
I felt like I was breaking every biological,
physical chemical law possible
and that I was in control.
I was doing what seemed like it shouldn't be possible
and I was surviving it,
I wanted to find my limit,
see where my body would break.
I became very concerned with gaps,
spaces between my bones,
absent places where I was certain
there had once been flesh
but I couldn't quite remember when.
I began to measure things in abs
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Literature
Yes, I Have a Penis
Yes, I Have A Penis
Do not assume (if I hold the door for you),
that I am making a statement
about your inabilities
to open the door for yourself.
If you hold it for me,
I'll say 'thankyou'.
Do not assume (if I pay for the meal),
that I am underestimating
your earning capacity
as a woman.
If you invite me out for a meal,
you're paying.
Do not assume (if I defend your rights),
that I am belittling
the attempts that you have made
to defend your rights yourself.
If you defend my rights,
I'll consider you human.
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Literature
He and She
He was religion,
she was the world,
it took her a while, 
but she slowly believed.
His verses filled her with a hope, 
beyond her wildest dreams. 
He was love,
She was society.
He seeped in her structures 
built skyscrapers in her skies
and mended the cracks in her fragile bones
He was imagination,
and she was insanity.
together they were the spark
of an idea, that ignited 
a blaze on her mountain peaks 
He was the winter,
and she warmed him up.
She was the summer,
and he was her shade.
They blended together, 
a match set by fate. 
Their path was dark,
so they lit a candle 
and were burned by its flames.
The autumn of their love
turned into falling leaves, 
and she was the victim
of a passion that killed her
in her early years of spring. 
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I think way beyond too much. Too fast. 
I break the unbreakables.
What am i but what i think of me? How limited we are when considering ourselves. How irrevocably conditioned. 
I want you. Still. I recognize myself daring to dream you  yet once again. 
Something's wrong here. Am i building you up somehow? I lost the ability to judge. myself. I feel as if i'm walking already deeply transited corridors. Like i know all the sights. I know all the turns. It doesn't make them less real though, less true, but i've been here so long, i've passed so many times, i am already kind of immune to its knowledge, like when you repeat the same word over and over again, it eventually loses its meaning...
I wanna feel the tension of your existence
I think you
And look for you
In new places
In unfamiliar faces

But you are not there
Of course...
You are never there

None is you
None is like me.
What am i but what i think of me? How limited we are when considering ourselves. How irrevocably conditioned. 
I want you. Still. I recognize myself daring to dream you  yet once again. 
Something's wrong here. Am i building you up somehow? I lost the ability to judge. myself. I feel as if i'm walking already deeply transited corridors. Like i know all the sights. I know all the turns. It doesn't make them less real though, less true, but i've been here so long, i've passed so many times, i am already kind of immune to its knowledge, like when you repeat the same word over and over again, it eventually loses its meaning...

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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016   Artist
Hey~~

Just wanted to thank you for the fave!

Also, since I'm currently focusing on music, I was wondering if you'd be interested in listening/sharing my music?

If you are, I can link you to where you can find that stuff!

-Dylan Seto
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feliolmedo Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Student General Artist
Link me on ;)
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DylanSeto Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2016   Artist
Okay!

Here: youtu.be/xEJ-s3RcVDI

Let me know what you think :)

And if you like it, sharing it would be cool too. ;)
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MissJudgedGirl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch! :meow:
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wave by chil96

thank you kindly for the fav on He and She. I'm glad you found my work worth your time :tighthug: and welcome to dA hope you enjoy your time around here :party:
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feliolmedo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Your poem fell really close to my heart :) and thank you for the kind welcome!!
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